tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5731742043351043726.post2800528961363581668..comments2024-02-20T04:48:48.863-08:00Comments on krismulkey.com: Creep ShowKris Mulkeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10852555527567136103noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5731742043351043726.post-12292979646752564582011-07-08T23:18:49.944-07:002011-07-08T23:18:49.944-07:00YEs!! I love the creepy way it started, then the s...YEs!! I love the creepy way it started, then the sudden switch to the 2 girls. Then back to the creepy.I kind of would have liked to see it all from the creepy's POV though. THAT would be really interesting. Great job with this. I've never been flashed until this story. ;)The Drama Mamahttp://frommywriteside.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5731742043351043726.post-82681758478217306022011-07-08T16:08:34.120-07:002011-07-08T16:08:34.120-07:00Sorry Yullya!!Sorry Yullya!!Kris Mulkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10852555527567136103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5731742043351043726.post-13589464506661094272011-07-08T15:38:51.620-07:002011-07-08T15:38:51.620-07:00Oh ick! I was so revolted with the beginning segme...Oh ick! I was so revolted with the beginning segment that it was hard to think of it as just a prank. But that nausea that I am now feeling only means you did a great job with this prompt.Yuliyahttp://www.shesuggests.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5731742043351043726.post-24312884710013594672011-07-08T15:10:30.061-07:002011-07-08T15:10:30.061-07:00Carrie - you are so right! I referred to a cat, mo...Carrie - you are so right! I referred to a cat, monkey and a deer. LOL. Rookie move. HA!Kris Mulkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10852555527567136103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5731742043351043726.post-68724343136035821682011-07-08T14:58:42.154-07:002011-07-08T14:58:42.154-07:00Wowsers friend! I love that you went for dark and ...Wowsers friend! I love that you went for dark and scary and that you flipped viewpoints- tricky!<br /><br />I read your note at the bottom about this coming from a real experience; so sorry to read that!Galit Breenhttp://theselittlewaves.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5731742043351043726.post-80435062744727694012011-07-08T14:54:50.635-07:002011-07-08T14:54:50.635-07:00Ooh, creepy. Nice building of the tension.Ooh, creepy. Nice building of the tension.Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10899840678799618083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5731742043351043726.post-61668428182809980192011-07-08T13:10:57.066-07:002011-07-08T13:10:57.066-07:00This was amusing as well as creepy. I liked how yo...This was amusing as well as creepy. I liked how you flipped back and gave the perspective of the flasher as well. Just goes to show, sometimes there is no "evil" in someone's motives, they just want to be funny.<br /><br />Small critiques: you use cliches a few times that don't flow as well with the story. The one about the cat in the first section and the one about the deer Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5731742043351043726.post-51430002256066044502011-07-08T12:52:33.722-07:002011-07-08T12:52:33.722-07:00Creep show is right!!! Why do people DO that sort ...Creep show is right!!! Why do people DO that sort of thing? Ick. Loved the switching back and forth between perspectives. Very nice job!<br /><br />Stopping by from RDC.Katie @ Chicken Noodle Gravyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02852793993330125727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5731742043351043726.post-72277262679466235832011-07-08T07:32:28.005-07:002011-07-08T07:32:28.005-07:00Awesome! I love the way it flips between the chara...Awesome! I love the way it flips between the characters. <br />Creepy that it happened to you in real life though!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com